Well the drawing obviously isn't yours, you probably didn't even come up with the idea for this post but you requested critique so lets do this. For starters the quality is low it's very small the text is outlined with black and white inside which makes it readable which is nice. The character depicted is very animu and the perspective is fine. The subject matter poses a question. My answer to the question being, tell you to go home you're drunk and when you inevitably ignore my advice I will give you a twitter or tumblr account to give you in which you can post all your drunken text on and then the next morning you and I can go through your probably embarrassing garblings.